tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22457860964602279532024-02-06T18:04:10.506-08:00Critique Group - November SessionJames Paickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02009730238564424220noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-33613157826400313272015-12-08T13:28:00.000-08:002015-12-08T13:28:07.416-08:00November TIER 4 Exercise Video November exercise Video<br />
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Hey James, here's two production paintings depicting ancient Egyptians collaborating with aliens to build the pyramides and stuff. Looking forward to your feedback!</div>
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Hi James. First was done for a contest on a theme Black Church. The 2nd was one that I had hopes for but abandoned. 3rd was for a client with a very specific brief.<br />
If you would like to do a more in-depth crit on one, you can go for the 1st or 2nd pic, whichever you think you can fix more.<br />
ThanksAaron Wilkersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564801966772674861noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-47903404016753198042015-11-14T18:36:00.001-08:002015-11-14T18:36:22.573-08:00Bruno Ortan Tier 2Hello James I'm rly sorry for posting this late. I didn't see the invitation and because I had a lot of work for school I couldn't post anything. Here are two of the paintings I did for class. I couldn't finish them as I wanted but I'm looking forward to your critique. The maze one is a photobash and the other is done just using brushes. Thanks<br />
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<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03844669909411329052noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-74203584871330042512015-11-14T08:31:00.000-08:002015-11-14T08:31:27.727-08:00Ananda C. Arán - tier 1Hi James, sorry I'm late, here are two nearly finished images. They're very much in my comfort zone of environments with architecture and other than a bit more detail I don't know how to keep improving.<br />
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Hello James. I got inspired after playing AC-Syndicate and decided to make a fan-art piece. Any tips on how to create more realistic / dramatic lighting and shadows would help a lot as well as tips on how to further render the piece to it's final stage. Thanks, and looking forward to the paint-overs!<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02171096380334707564noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-38193507536411426362015-11-11T13:25:00.004-08:002015-11-11T13:25:47.908-08:00Jasza Dobrzanski - Tier 2Hey James,<br />
I'm sorry for being late with this, that food truck piece gave me a lot of trouble, so I kept reworking it and changing things. I'm looking forward to your critique.<br />
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<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04953099357670792846noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-36691154043757017832015-11-11T09:36:00.002-08:002015-11-11T09:36:43.636-08:00Andreas Kjær-Jensen - Tier 1Hey James, I hope I'm not too late, I had somehow made myself believe that I had more time to turn in my pieces.<br />
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An alien spaceship design (mix of 3D and 2D)<br />
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<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04474827212019852609noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-13710653948687310992015-11-11T02:53:00.000-08:002015-11-11T02:54:12.229-08:00Elodie Jean Tier 2 Sorry I am late...<br />
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Mainly, I would like some advice about texturing and lighting for the first one.</div>
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<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15716879823268353800noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-6788338569106977092015-11-10T23:52:00.000-08:002015-11-10T23:52:03.915-08:00Eric Hu - Tier 2Hey James. I'm trying to build a portfolio with a couple of strong pieces that could help me break into the industry. Area of focus: concept art and illustration. Any help is appreciated :)<div>
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Eric Prouthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14961566706581523960noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-87227406346610228582015-11-10T20:48:00.001-08:002015-11-10T20:49:27.899-08:00Seif Ragab - tier 2<div dir="ltr" style="text-align: left;" trbidi="on">
hello James these are my submissions for this month<br />
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Seif Ragabhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17710061947937177278noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-30282490800560441922015-11-10T18:42:00.002-08:002015-11-10T18:42:10.900-08:00Jenny Tan - Tier 4 ($50)<div style="text-align: left;">
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Hi James,<br />
A big thanks for your reviews so far - they have been incredibly helpful. One of my best design investments I have ever made - very much appreciated! Thanks as always for the time, effort and patience!<br />
My piece for this month.<br />
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High res @: http://i.imgur.com/XKM8CBV.jpg<br />
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Kattsenghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01931867260513920083noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-18366846854294378962015-11-10T05:54:00.004-08:002015-11-10T05:54:49.042-08:00Daniel Pollok -Tier 4(50$)<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09113237666909341595noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-48651116545752916942015-11-10T03:47:00.001-08:002015-11-10T03:47:13.297-08:00Eric Martin - Tier 3Hey James, i was hoping you could give me any pointers on design on this character. I wanted to make a military space suit design to be resistant to shrapnel and has rig on the back that has propulsion arms on the back for maneuvering. I wanted to make it intimidating and spidery. Thanks again.<br />
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Eric Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16369519327767599776noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-33170913955319632372015-11-09T22:38:00.003-08:002015-11-09T22:38:49.767-08:00Robert Ryminiecki- Tier 4Hi James,<br />
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Here is my piece for this month. I want to improve my environmental skills and I know that you are one of the best who can help me! Really looking forward to it.<br />
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<br />Robert Ryminieckihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16704621869040200160noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-85172024806225656702015-11-09T16:55:00.000-08:002015-11-09T16:55:06.266-08:00Juan Pablo Roldan - Tier 3<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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Hello James,<br />
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So glad to receive your feedback! :)<br />
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This month I want to get your opinion on this particular image, what happens to me in this picture is the same that I see on many of my works, I feel it is a little boring, I'm not sure by the lighting and many other aspects, I would love to know how to improve my work with color and especially the lighting. Thank you very much for this opportunity! I'm happy! :)<br />
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Note: Sorry for my english! :pRoldánhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09330844350506527569noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-83159209911442312002015-11-09T12:31:00.001-08:002015-11-09T12:31:30.204-08:00Peter Bara - Tier 2Hi James,<br />
Thank you for the opportunity! : )<br />
The first is a classic "lizardmen shaman" concept<br />
The second was made for a client who wanted some kind of molten hellhound driven by fury<br />
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<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10558342520438664160noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2245786096460227953.post-86546745543769222542015-11-09T09:29:00.002-08:002015-11-16T17:01:32.652-08:00Phil Booth - Tier 4Hi James,<br />
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I'm currently studying at FZD in term 2, this was an assignment from Vis Comm which I decided to take from line art to a final portfolio quality finish.<br />
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The original assignment was to design a defense structure for an RTS of your choosing. In this case I went for the trusty machine gun turret, and set my RTS on the moon in an Apollo era USA v Soviets Command and Conquer type game.<br />
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Feedback on design, execution, and presentation would be gratefully received. Many thanks.<br />
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